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Build a story that hooks readers from page one

Stop querying with a “maybe.” Stop hitting publish with a “maybe.”
Get the strategic, deep-dive developmental clarity
you need to diagnose plot holes, fix dragging pacing,
and turn your draft into a tight, unputdownable masterpiece.

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    What I Bring To Your Book

    I have spent years analyzing thousands of books, deconstructing top authors, and studying the leading authorities on narrative structure. When we work together, I bring that entire library of knowledge straight to your manuscript to show you exactly what is working in your story—and what isn’t.

    I’m the developmental editor you go to when you’ve already worked with a developmental editor.

    I’m the one you call when you know you’ve made your story pretty good, but you refuse to settle for just pretty good. When you’ve analyzed your draft six ways to Sunday and your eyes are starting to cross from all the scene lists and spreadsheets, I bring the ultimate objective clarity you need.

    Investing in a developmental editor is a major decision for your manuscript. To ensure we are a perfect structural fit before you commit any budget, I provide a complimentary evaluation of your opening pages.
    You will receive direct, actionable feedback on your first chapter. This trial shows you exactly how I analyze pacing, identify structural plot holes, and work to maximize your story’s impact from page one.

    How It Works:

    • Transparent Pricing: Final project rates are calculated based on your total word count, but this initial review costs nothing.
    • Direct Insight: You experience the exact depth, clarity, and analytical style I bring to a full manuscript.
    • No Obligation: You walk away with a clear diagnostic look at your opening hook, whether we choose to move forward together or not.

    No Formulas, Just Vision

    I don’t look at your book with a rigid checklist or a paint-by-numbers spreadsheet. I read to find its pulse. Because I have analyzed thousands of books, I’ve developed a precise internal compass for what makes a story grip a reader. I can feel exactly where the momentum dips, where a character’s choice rings false, and where the tension leaks out of a scene before it ever reaches a reader’s hands.

    Finding the Core Of Your story

    Every draft has a brilliant, tight story hiding underneath the noise. My job isn’t to change your voice; it’s to help you find the book you actually set out to write. I look at your manuscript and instantly see its peak potential, showing you exactly what to strip away so your true vision stands out. Together, we will uncover the strongest version of your story so your original vision shines through beautifully on every single page.

    My Only Rule: Does It Hook Me?

    I don’t care about arbitrary writing rules—I care about undeniable pull. If a reader can easily put your book down at the end of chapter one, the battle is already lost. When I read your opening, my brain is scanning for that immediate, magnetic grip. If it’s not there, we don’t guess why; I show you exactly where the connection broke and how to fix it.

    The Confidence to Finally Share Your Story.

    You have poured your heart into this draft—now, let’s make sure it reads exactly the way you envisioned it. Let’s strip away the hesitation and get your manuscript completely polished, compelling, and ready to meet its readers.

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    How We Can Work Together

    Every writer is at a different stage of their journey. I offer modular, highly customizable services so you can build the exact package your draft needs. Whether you require a single focused service or want to stack structural, line-level, and formatting rounds to take your manuscript from raw draft to publication-ready, we will tailor the process to your goals..

    PART I: INDIVIDUAL EDITING SERVICES
    • 🔵 Rate: $0.008 USD per word, per service.
    • 🔵 Choose the exact rounds of editing your manuscript needs—including Developmental Editing, Line Editing, or Proofreading & Formatting.
    • 🔵 Build a tailored, stacked package to polish your story’s structure, pacing, flow, and mechanics step-by-step.
    Part II: MANUSCRIPT CRITIQUE
    • 🔵 Rate: $0.004 USD per word.
    • 🔵 A high-level, comprehensive structural blueprint of your completed draft’s pacing, character arcs, and narrative tension.
    • 🔵 You receive a detailed diagnostic editorial letter (usually 2-3 pages) showing you exactly what is working and providing a clear, actionable plan for your self-edit.
    Part III: STORY CONSULTING
    • 🔵 Rate: $100 USD per session (up to 2 hours).
    • 🔵 Direct, one-on-one strategy sessions to break through writer’s block, brainstorm plot ideas, or outline a brand-new project.
    • 🔵 Ideal for writers who want a sounding board and strategic direction before diving into their next draft.
    Part IV: THE FREE TEST DRIVE
    • 🔵 Rate: $0 (Completely Free)
    • 🔵 A complimentary evaluation of your opening chapter to experience my editorial style firsthand.
    • 🔵 No budget commitment required—you’ll see exactly how I analyze pacing and tension before deciding on a larger package.

    Real Feedback From Real Authors

    There is nothing better than seeing a manuscript click into place. Here is how fellow writers are making progress on their publishing goals.

    • “I can confirm what Sibo is saying, she is amazing, seeing stuff I did not see. Really looking forward to working with her further!”



      Antony J. BELL
      Author
    • “Sibo is someone I would absolutely recommend getting in touch with, the constructive feedback provided was so helpful to the point I will definitely be using it to also improve my next book which has been in progress for years”
      ER Shepherd
      Author
    • “Sibo has been the most helpful, and I greatly appreciate her. I absolutely love how she worded the feedback. I knew I was missing something and now I know exactly what it was.I started applying the suggestions immediately”
      Arie N. Sterling
      Author

    Join the Movement of Dedicated Storytellers

    Writing a book is a solitary journey, but polishing it shouldn’t be. Don’t let your manuscript sit unfinished or unread. Whether you are ready to stack services for a complete polish or just want to test the waters with a free sample, let’s partner up and bring your story to life.

    “A great developmental editor doesn’t tell you how to write your story—they help you uncover the best possible version of the story you are already telling.”

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    Free Sample Evaluation

    Try before you buy. Experience my editing style with a free critique of your opening chapter.

    7 years of experience!

    A deep-dive approach to story consulting and editing, built on years of studying and working with the craft.

    Transparent Rates

    No hidden fees. Budget confidently with an easy baseline rate of $0.008 per word.

    Frequently Asked Questions

    Everything you need to know about how we will work together to elevate your manuscript.

    Developmental editing looks at the “big picture” of your manuscript. I analyze your plot structure, story pacing, character development, world-building, and overall narrative tension to ensure your story is as gripping and cohesive as possible.

    I believe in simple, transparent pricing. My flat rate across all independent editing services is $0.008 USD per word. Once we agree on your project scope, I will provide a clear contract with structured payment milestones so you can budget with total confidence.

    Absolutely! I offer a completely free sample critique of your opening chapter. This lets you experience my feedback style firsthand and ensures we are a perfect creative match before you spend a single cent.

    Yes! If you are stuck in the middle of a draft, dealing with writer’s block, or trying to organize a brand-new concept, my Story Consulting sessions are designed to help you brainstorm plot ideas and outline your project step-by-step.

    I work with all fiction genres! Whether you are writing a contemporary romance, a fantasy epic, a fast-paced thriller, or a quiet literary drama, my focus remains the same: helping you master your story structure, pacing, and character development so your unique voice shines on the page.